Bowkow (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

e ain eee...e ficki facki

ihavenofriends3 (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

wow good song really catchy

250269sus (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

you have inspired me to attempt to make my own with a different song - great work

attackthedemonenemy (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

this is wiltshire in england i live here not america sorry dude

TriumphCaz (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

Just to clear it up for any of the young'uns, Salisbury is a well-known and attractive city but has nothing to do with Solsbury Hill, which is on the 'posh' side of Bath and inspired Peter to write this.

61fcigam (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

love the originality, nobody can take that from you!!

Skymaxy (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

cut out the zooming, shaking and the wobbly panning. Use more close ups, people are more interesting than street scenes, dont let any shots last more than 5 seconds. Formula = Wide shot, medium shot, close-up then back to wide shot this gives structure the eye can follow. Use more Cut-ins like the Ducks scene, this tells the viewer something different is coming up. You'll be be suprised at the difference a simple formula like this makes. Well done so far do more.

superpezz101 (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

i thought it was the original lol

bluelightcycle (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

Nice work mate! I think this is actually just like the music videos they had way back when they had just invented the idea of music videos. Could almost be the official Solisubry Hill vid.

lottietotty (November 30, 1999 at 12:00 am)

Pack your things I've come to take you home!